Monday, July 11, 2011

Boy Comments

Rating: 5.0

He is not yet stuck with the daily task
of scraping his face with steel
or the mighty task of bending his will
nightly to woman's will.
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robert dickerson
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Trinny Ruizi 11 July 2011

Very good. I gave it a ten. Very good expression and perfect language skill. Remarkable grammar and full of sensibilities. Written in a creative way, really true in all aspects. Please rate and comment my poem frosty afternoon.

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