Sunday, November 19, 2006

Boxing Ring Comments

Rating: 4.5

Darkness is near
spaces are closing
i cant breathe no more
the bell rings
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Gina Glaser
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Pia Andersson 09 December 2006

I do hope that the last round is yours. You write so well and I think its really clever to write about life like one big boxing game Wishing you a lovely day-Pia

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Brian Dorn 19 November 2006

Good write whether figurative or literal. But if literal, I like how this is coming from a female's perspective. Well done, Gina/blackrose! Brian

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