Saturday, January 9, 2010

Boxed In Clever Comments

Rating: 3.5

Whip my skin until it cries and bleeds,
carry me upwards, fill my needs,
drain me dry before you go,
leave me here.
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D.A. Woods
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Heather M 01 February 2010

I enjoyed this one- it touched my heart and I believe this was created in your soul.

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Lyxo D. 27 January 2010

I like it very much, especially the last line, it's very sensual but beautiful at the same time...

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Caleb Crow 15 January 2010

This is so entralling, full of exisistential anks, and sexy at the same time, really cool poem my friend going into my favs...

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