Wednesday, March 29, 2006

Box (Being Controlled) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Close me in a box,
Close the lid up tight,
I don’t need to see,
I don’t need the light.
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Aisha Sherazi
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Hallmat H 16 June 2008

wish you the best... because of your sweet poems regards

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Lydia Francese 13 May 2006

Wow! I can relate to this too. It really shows how many people feel. I like the way the beginning stanzas start the same way. A 10. -Lydia

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trisha evensen 09 May 2006

wow i can relate to this one, terrific, splendidly expressed.

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Aisha Sherazi

Aisha Sherazi

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