Thursday, February 16, 2012

Bowling Sestina Comments

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When quite young I loved to bowl
You had to release the ball and let it roll
The perfect game was always your goal
You had to invest your heart and soul
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J.B. LeBuert
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Adeline Foster 02 March 2012

You are braver than me. Have you read Elizabeth Bishop's? I see you just dug in and did it. The subject choice is not bad in this one. Adeline

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 16 February 2012

I like bowling, which is a trendy indoor game, but with each ball there goes your parent's fifty cent. Any way nice poem.

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J.B. LeBuert

J.B. LeBuert

Kenmore, New York
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