Tuesday, July 24, 2007

Bowling A Maiden Over! - A Haiku Comments

Rating: 2.4


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Dónall Dempsey
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Gina Pisapia 24 July 2007

Hee hee you've bowled me a googlie! Clever and well obseerved and transformed as usual by your way of seeing things...you never state the obvious... obviously! I like the twists you put on things. A 10! Howzat! Liked the way you incorporated all the cricket terms... it made me laugh. I didn't know if I was a ladybird being knocked off of a leaf by a big fat dropp of water or a fellow poet reading a haiku! love Gina XXX

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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