Thursday, November 3, 2016

Bowed With Grace Comments

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His silver head is bowed,
His shoulders bent with the age of time.
Tobacco stained teeth tightly grip his
Corn cob pipe.
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Darwin Henry Beuning 18 March 2017

Dorothy, very nice. Yes, of course, dance while you can!

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Kim Barney 03 November 2016

Dorothy, fantastic job with this poem! I'm not quite in the condition yet of the old man you described, but who knows how long it will be before it happens to any of us? Sadly, I have never been much of a dancer, anyway. I was drawn to this poem in the first place because of the title. I have bowed with Grace many times as she prayed. (My mother's name was Grace.)

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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