Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, June 25, 2013

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It was never intended to serve
Even he does not deserve
To remain through out under domain
And painfully kill self and remain
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Heather Wilkins 28 June 2013

a good read, nice writing

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 25 June 2013

nice call hasmukh sir bow wishes

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great Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 3 minutes ago good Comment +1 Amazing

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great Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 3 minutes ago good Comment +1 Amazing

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Kelly Sears6 minutes ago I loved this poem. Comment +1 hmm

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Thomas Jacobs4 minutes ago liked the words, but the point was lost to me in the middle, saved by the end Comment +1 great and interesting

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Faisal Al Rasheed4 minutes ago I suppose maybe some grammar but, i'm no professional.

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It was never intended to serve Even he does not deserve

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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