Tuesday, July 3, 2012

Bow Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bow down to your divine gift
For you are but a man
She is your queen
Be a real man
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Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

Epic! -yeah yeah...bow down--i did like this line very much -Clothe her as she clothe you--unique

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Sanjay Mehta 08 September 2012

Yes SHE has been made an commodity.........but they who have done so do not realise the powers of this beauty. Introspection is the need of the hour for the powers which she has if unleashed will wipe out this universe and the HE in he. Nice didactic effort. I invite you to go through my poem Women

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Godfrey Morris 12 August 2012

Lovely written poem a woman is a keeper of a man's heart. The apple of his eyes.

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