Wednesday, March 15, 2006

Bow Before My Death Comments

Rating: 4.8

I lie beneath the flame this night,
I bow before my death,
He takes my hand,
And holds me close,
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Holly Heron
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Zevanda Borjon 03 March 2008

wow i love how you were able to make me feel like i was actually there...and now i am enchanted by the thought of it...i love it! ! !

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Kyle Carson 03 October 2007

I love this poem sooooooo much cuz one day death will take my hand and hold me close and tht day will be soon

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BEAU GOLDEN 24 June 2006

As i sit reading this in my blue jeans and white golf shirt (yes, really) i was taken away from the poem (which i had decided already to add to my favorites) becuz u suddenly wrote and i read 'death is a man clothed in blue jeans and a white shirt) wow! too coincidental. Is it weird that i almost always wear either black or white too? oh well. Loved this piece and I'm adding it to my favorites. The time has come, the fire has taken u..

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