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Rating: 5.0

Flecks of joy flick through bounty of beauty
blessing slips over grin sparking over stone
as moonlit flits across the darkness of door
soul awakes by eternity in ages and eons
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Dr subhendu kar
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Nolan Trenton 14 October 2009

Wow, this is an amazing poem..............

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

soul awakes by eternity in ages and eons Rachel Ann Butler

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'love moves faster all across sky azure in unison' Indeed captures the right imagery. And also Soul Conscept.. Lithe write up. And Ten dr. sakti

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nice poem, makes us involve fully in it while reading...

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Marieta Maglas 14 June 2009

This poem can be integrate to purely descriptive poetry. It contains beautiful ''similes; like : ''blessing slips over grin sparking over stone as moonlit flits across the darkness of door'' ''verdant green and blue dusts all when similar as sizzles of rain reels through the dusty summer'' and cognitive metaphors like: ''soul awakes by eternity in ages and eons'' ''space seems to mingle by melting shadow of dream'' 'mixed metaphors, (cognitive and visual) like: ''all dimensions by distances slowly blur in blue'' ''mirror never fails to find its image even being virtual '' conceptual metaphors, like: ''tranquility finds truth of reason yet unobtrusive'' oxymoronic epithets, like: ''knowingly unknown riffles'' very well written, with love..10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 June 2009

“mirror never fails to find its image even being virtual depth of silence slowly precipitates over rune of shadow yet know time and space even differs by creed of variety knowingly unknown riffles resolute from crowd within” The whole poem is lovely and full of magnificent metaphors. Very bright write it is, I get pleasure from it a lot. My love with 10+

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