Sunday, May 24, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

Flecks of joy flick through bounty of beauty
blessing slips over grin sparking over stone
as moonlit flits across the darkness of door
soul awakes by eternity in ages and eons
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Dr subhendu kar
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Robert Leary 03 December 2009

I want to thank you for saying 'hi' as poemhunter is like walking into a strange city where you know no one...slowly you begin to recoginze old faces...but it's really the new ones that matter...your poems have a fresh aroma of new woven rugs of words....I've been to India and plan to return...stay intouch! Bob

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Carol Gall 10 November 2009

one truly beautiful write dr 10

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Marieta Maglas 12 June 2009

special conceptual metaphors: ''soul awakes by eternity in ages and eons'' ''space seems to mingle by melting shadow of dream'' ''tranquility finds truth of reason yet unobtrusive'' ''knowingly unknown riffles resolute from crowd within '' as the highest “game”, played with symbols and rhetoric....10++

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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