Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Bountiful Breeze Comments

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Wind in the willow
wind in the pine,
blowing wherever it shall please,
but never moreso peacefully, than through the wondering mind-
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Smoky Hoss
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Dave Walker 27 May 2013

A wonderful poem. Nature is the best thing, and it's free.

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Wahab Abdul 22 May 2013

very soothing and the last line is wonderful.. enjoyed

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Shahzia Batool 21 May 2013

A gentle and tender write! ! !

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Valerie Dohren 20 May 2013

Nature is indeed a great pacifier. Lovely write.

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Juan Olivarez 19 May 2013

Hey hey. Love the rhymes and the structure. Good job.

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