Boundless Thirsts Comments

Beautiful!

Fantastic. An attempt of self analysis floating with nature n ature

Very nicely written Full of meaning, melodious and poetic Reading it I felt like I should take and perhaps all of us should take on and off a ride on your silken cloud As long as we shudder on the cloud, we will be glad to have a chance to come back to the sea I hope the last time we are on the cloud, it will be a ride of joy Our sorrows tend to become small If the balance of good and bad is tipping towards the good As for now, I think may still shudder just like you. I just keep on trying.... Many thanks for the wondeful imagery Congrats You get also from me a 10+

reflections of your life you see from above...a lovely poem with beautiful imagery....beauty and meaning blends well in this poem...i take this into my favs....10

I love your idea of the cloud and not simply noticing what was below you, but using it as a soft platform to evaluate your life. You have used beautiful imagery (I loved the stars) and the whole piece has a lovely lovely flow See! I can't stop using the word love...Tis true I do LOVE it all. Karin Anderson

Quite simply a great combination of ideas and imagery....I enjoy reading your poetry Kesav

this is great it is a perfect combination of interesting poetic devices full of imagery and the reality of life in the dreamland of dreams kip it up

such a great composition sir.....flawless.

last two lines sum up well......did my poetry seem like wakeful dreams to you? It did this one....and smooth the flow!

its called fantastic when you create a whole train of thought along with enjoying the beauty of nature.......go shoulder to shoulder...never departing... a serene retrospective.....the decipher of ambiguity is quite interesting....the words spontaneously overflowing to make the verse supreme. thanks/salu

Ufffff what a marvellous write kesav, i wish one day i'll also write like the way you put the deep emotions in the pen, i'm thankful to you that you asked me to read this marvellously strong poem..... 'I look ahead ‘n shudder to think To where my journey to where I’m led'…the whole poem is extremely beautiful but these lines are superb 100+++++ fav. rgds asif

u tried to create a world of emotions with nature and its elements... and that resulted in a beautiful piece with an enchanting imagery... :)

A very beautiful poem Kesav, lovely flow to the verse. Best wishes, Andrew

I loved the composition. indeed nice! specially the lines: ...Ending my journey ending my dream My mind awakens me; the cloud resigns…

Wonderful composition. Love it.

If only all my dreams could be so soft and silky. Mine are interrrupted by my better half snoring

Extremely wonderful.I liked the first line immensely.Thank you.

The pictures in this poem are enough to send a painter like me to her drawing board! You evoke very well the musings and half-dreams that come on an otherwise sleepless night, as the past and future swirl into the present - the sense of floating, drifting, swirling, in this meditative state is captured beautifully in these lines about reviewing your state of being.

This a remarkable poem in the way you have drawn a picture of your life drifting like a cloud. Sweet dreams my friend. Bob 10/10

Reading a poem in sincerity and revealing the built in bright aspects in it wonderfully, taking pain, is a trait god given seen in good poets only...your understanding comment is much satisfying to my mind...thanx a lot, Ben...