Sunday, September 14, 2008

Boundless Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

A term which is usually abandoned,
no matter how far we may get to actually realize what we've done
that had caused such a fret;
We live only to conquer even the wildest of them;
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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 September 2008

as we move across the' causer and effect ' rerlationship, to every action there is equal response in magnitude and opposite vector, when we know the cause and we are supposed to know the effects to, never be befuddled what ever the graceful matter may be, quite thought provoking, ingenious, true to its spirit, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Koyel Mitra 16 September 2008

Excellent poem.Well penned.A10.

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Kesav Easwaran 16 September 2008

not to strive for the unrealistic detriment...good message...good rhyming (true/through) well done...thanks

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