Thursday, April 30, 2009

Bound And Gagged By My Own Insecurities Comments

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I can’t say it.
Those three words you long for.
Don’t make me.
If I say it, the bond will hurt worse
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Paige Nielsen
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Melissa Nikolova 01 May 2009

What beauty. I love the hesitance in the tone of the piece! But in the end, you wrap it up by saying that you don’t have to say it, because your eyes are screaming it… Lovely.

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Beautifully written, much said in this short poem, and i love the emotion. Once one has been hurt so many times, they find it hard to show love. But you simply can't let insecurities and/or bad experiences keep you from living. Lovely piece Paige, thanks for sharing

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