Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Bound Comments

Rating: 5.0

To be bound is a terrible thing
Locked from the world
where morning birds sing.
Racked with terror
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vanessa feliciano
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David Taylor 12 January 2010

Good Poem Vanessa, I feel poetry is an escape into freedom sometimes too. Do use a spellchecker though, mistakes distract readers from the message, David.

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Ken E Hall 19 December 2009

Solitude can sometimes bring out the best poems but to be bound ain't good like free Betty which I wrote...4 chickens in a tiny cage all their life laying eggs! Your poem has a good story line avaluvli xmas regard

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James S Newcomb Lang 17 December 2009

Believe in the power of your dreams!

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vanessa feliciano

vanessa feliciano

Charlotte NC
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