Friday, June 20, 2014

Boulder In A Stream Comments

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In the Big Apple I stand and see
I must be invisible like a tree
The flow of humanity wandering by
They're all in a rush I wonder why
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Darlene Walsh
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Bri Edwards 18 September 2015

great rhyming, and fascinating story. of course i KNOW there is at least ONE person in New York City who would notice you, , , , , , , , , , , at least if i were there when you were! ! ! ! ! NICE! [or did you mean Penn Yan, New York (my sister's 'summer home'!) ? ? bri :)

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Lorraine Colon 25 June 2014

This is true of big cities; everyone has a destination and a time limit. Don't get in their way or you'll get trampled. But travel to a small town and the scene changes drastically. Life is lived at a slower pace and people seem more caring. But once in a while it's exciting to get in the fast lane and keep up with the traffic. How much more you'll appreciate the slower pace of life when you return to it. Great poem.

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