Moonlit waterfall
In an orange orchard-
Though a slim stream now,
Your beauty is still flowing freely!
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Nice use of alliteration, it really works to link the poem together. I also like the image of the color orange against the moonlit sky.
fantastic what a vast space for my heart and mind thanks god bless u
This conjures a beautiful picture in the mind of beauty that is neverending!
I like it. Moonlit waterfall...very nice. That alone paints a picture in my mind. I love the moon and well all of nature so that combo made my day.
I like this. Even though there are few words in your poem I somehow get an image of california orchards at midnight. You paint a picture well.
Wow so amazing! Well writen though short but I'd like to have it on audio. Thanks.
Brevity of words and beautifully expressed. Like it. Thanks for sharing. Leonard
So much Power and Meaning in such short composition... *applauds...
Both waterall and stream are free, bouffant beauty, not hedged in! Wonderful; D
You were able to convey your thought with just few words, That makes a great writer. You are very good. I like it, please keep the candle borning
Short and crisp! ..... Very pictresque too! !