Saturday, May 1, 2010

Bouffant Beauty Comments

Rating: 4.3

Moonlit waterfall
In an orange orchard-
Though a slim stream now,
Your beauty is still flowing freely!
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Vijay Sai R
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Valsa George 01 April 2013

Short and crisp! ..... Very pictresque too! !

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Amanda Laurent 05 December 2012

Nice use of alliteration, it really works to link the poem together. I also like the image of the color orange against the moonlit sky.

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Penky Yumnam 05 December 2012

Cute senery and never ending but I think its too short

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Asif Andalib 02 October 2012

Deep and meaningful poem. Nice imagery.

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Sallam Yassin 29 September 2012

fantastic what a vast space for my heart and mind thanks god bless u

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Hazel Durham 29 September 2012

This conjures a beautiful picture in the mind of beauty that is neverending!

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Søren Valentine 29 September 2012

I like it. Moonlit waterfall...very nice. That alone paints a picture in my mind. I love the moon and well all of nature so that combo made my day.

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Olivia Gates 17 April 2012

I like this. Even though there are few words in your poem I somehow get an image of california orchards at midnight. You paint a picture well.

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Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) 17 April 2012

its amazing....short n swt... :)

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Wow so amazing! Well writen though short but I'd like to have it on audio. Thanks.

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Hribhu Dey 22 June 2011

nice visual...like it.Hribhu

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Leonard Dabydeen 24 August 2010

Brevity of words and beautifully expressed. Like it. Thanks for sharing. Leonard

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Lyncoln De shedsh 16 August 2010

Short, sweet and meaninfull

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Fahad Witchking 12 August 2010

So much Power and Meaning in such short composition... *applauds...

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Both waterall and stream are free, bouffant beauty, not hedged in! Wonderful; D

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Khaled Charkie 03 June 2010

beautiful words to a calm soul

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Subbaraman N V 27 May 2010

Short and sweet! Great!

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Fubara Benstowe 24 May 2010

You were able to convey your thought with just few words, That makes a great writer. You are very good. I like it, please keep the candle borning

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Wayne Lenihan 21 May 2010

It was a pleasure to read. A beautifully composed poem!

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Edna Ipalei 21 May 2010

I like. it's short and to the point.

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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