Bottomless Pit Comments

The aim of charity often confuses me. The poem is an excellent one and speaks of some really deep, serious issues. Thanks for sharing Mr. Parray.

I love the imagery and self examination in retrospect. A poem that inspires us all to question what motivates our good deeds.

Only deceives the weak, the blind When the body falls, the soul flies The mind never dies Here I like to add, The soul will never dies.

Was it truly for them or my own greed I've often thought this same question about my actions that could be considered selfless or charitable. Was my motivation to help others? Or simply to please myself by appearing kindhearted. A good read, and relatable.10

Fantastic write. Very philosophical. You have a lot of depth that shows in this poem.10

Have I ever helped someone in desperate need? Was it truly for them or my own greed Have I ever really sown a good deed to reap in the end Have I dug my own grave to sleep in the end? Difficult questions but I think our conscience can reply it.

The deep question about life and death-our true purpose of life, whether we are fulfilling the duties for which we have been sent to this earth is what the poet seems to ask when he says- Have I ever really sown a good deed to reap in the end Have I dug my own grave to sleep in the end?

Have I ever helped anyone in desperate need? Was it truly for them or my own greed? Highly introspective, thoughtful, virtuous, compassionate query indeed

When the body falls, the soul flies The mind never dies, but rest it will find Have I ever helped someone in desperate need? .......Really. Very deeply envisioned about soul.body and mind. Looking deeply into our bottomless soul will find the answer. Thanks for posting such an intensive poem. ......10

The questions asked at the end are such pertinent questions one should keep asking oneself several times in life. They will help us see where we really are. Such deep self introspection will help one to fix right priorities in life. A profound write!

A beautiful poem, Ayman! Very happy to see a philosophical and meaningful reflection on life and its ways. ' A wonderful query! Have i ever helped someone in desperate need? Only a pure soul can ask such a question. I am sure you will help too when the opportunity stares before you. Well done! Full 10 for you.

Deep questions, Ayman. Have we done enough to earn eternal reward. Only looking deep into our bottomless soul will find the answer