Wednesday, April 30, 2008

Bottled Up Inside Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bottled up inside are the words I never said,
The feelings that I hide, the lines u never read.
You can see it in my eyes, read it on my face, trapped inside are lies,
Of the past I cannot replace.
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Kasi Navadomskis
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Bottle 24 May 2022

I wrote this and took it down. This was my inner turmoil of my love. For a hopeful future

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very emotional. i loved it. a great right. i hope you'll read a couple of mine and comment them!

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Howard Johnson 02 May 2008

This shows a lot of hopeful pain, Excellent word flow Kasi,

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Priyanka Shetty 30 April 2008

wow.... i loved ur poem.... i can totally relate to you...... thanks for sharing........

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