I hold my breath,
And force myself to breathe,
I take another step,
And then I'm close to being free.
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I totally agree with Silentpoet Grl. Moreover I think you are a fine poet. Thanks for sharing your poems.
sometimes its easier to just say 'im fine' with a fake smile upon your face... thats what poetry can be wonderful for - an outlet for some of the 'bottled up' emotions - great write.
Very clever indeed and very positive. tfs 10/10