Friday, April 6, 2012

Bottled Joy Comments

Rating: 4.8

The sounds of children laughing,
The fresh smell after rain,
The new buds in the Springtime,
The clatter of a train,
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Dawn Ferrett
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Adeline Foster 15 July 2013

Another Wow! of a poem. I do hope you have been writing for a long time. Seems you've got the how of it. Read mine - The Captain's Secret - Adeline

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Jayne Davies 16 February 2013

I wish I had some of it Dawn! Great poem x Well done

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John Brown 29 September 2012

Lovely stuff Dawn. I enjoyed it. I'd buy a bottle of it any day.

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Ruth Walters 30 August 2012

.....and what a grand poem too. perfect rhythm and rhyme

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Heather Wilson 16 April 2012

Yes it would, and so is that poem, just grand.

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Dawn Ferrett

Dawn Ferrett

Portsmouth, Hampshire
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