Monday, June 25, 2007

Bottled At The Source Comments

Rating: 5.0

Approaching the oasis this thirsty pairing
A ragged beggar and a snake charmer
Noticed an oddly shaped ominous cloud
Which seemed to be hovering overhead__
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Ted Sheridan
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Rinzu Susan Rajan 23 October 2008

ur words are soooooooooooo powerful...and yet touching... u write with honesty and that puts u ahead of others... :)

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Scarlett Treat 28 June 2007

There is an old Indian proverb, to always allow the other man to drink first - and that way, if the water is bad, he will die while you live. And you seem to have hit the nail on the head...

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Not a member No 4 26 June 2007

This is your vision of man I suspect, and it might be quite close to the truth. Great read Ted. Sat here wide-eyed. You could make a bomb on this kind of thing.

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Ivan Donn Carswell 26 June 2007

Truely a stirring parable - and an early case of recycling. How far was it to the next Oasis? Rgds, Ivan

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