Sunday, March 4, 2012

Bottle Rocket Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's flimsy and clumsy
and epileptically sturdy
Lacking circuit transistors
With 20 inch motors
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Kevin Patrick
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Pheko Motaung 05 March 2012

A fabulous fabulous poem! A masterpiece you have composed here.Thank you very much for this great worthy write

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Poet Of The River 04 March 2012

haha it reminds me of how much fun chem class was. :) it was a good read. have you ever thought of becoming a published poet? i think you could be easily. :)

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Dave Walker 04 March 2012

A giant of a poem, but really worth the read. A fantastic write.

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