Bottle Of Dreams Comments

extraordinary imagination and style! [Leaving everything undone And an empty bottle of dreams ] Congrat! 10/10.

You're just too busy disappearing Leaving everything undone And an empty bottle of dreams.......full of imagination but wait it may come true as dreams are meant to be realized.. fine piece i liked it.....10 read mine all drams not come true.. cry not.. i miss.. miss i miss u

...can`t hear over the noise you`re not making. I love that. Your writing is so rich of imagery. I love how you give personification to inanimate objects. In your bio, you said don`t ask you to change it because you wouldn`t... why would you? Poems are subjective. What others find strange and without sense, may ring true to many more. Never change what you say is finished. Keep writing.