Bottle In The Sea Comments

while in sorrow, drink lots of water to recharge the tear glands; nice imagination: the agony is dumped in the ocean! lovely poem

Imaginative Rini. Reminds me of an old poem of mine Send the Blues Back.+10

That 's a splendid poem! To throw your pains into the sea.Just great!

...Throw this pain into the sea for never again you will see-Very rich expression Rini, Liked it!

Pains! ! With tears! But hope lies ahead of you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

An outstanding poem. Easy, lucid and imaginative.

This is a great and very inspiring poem.

Excellent Work Rini, thanks for sharing +10