Friday, September 25, 2015

Both Sides Now Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sharing your children
A major loss to a parent
For one
Whose children
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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2016

With selflessness! Nice piece of work.

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Amitava Sur 05 October 2015

An in intense write with emotions and sentiments. We are after so many material gains but our mind ultimately needs love and caring what we forget at last within the crowd of foppishness and cheap gains. Very well addressed.

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Valsa George 02 October 2015

The children of separated parents usually see only one side! Children will stay with the more powerful with more money! But what is needed more is love and care and they should be allowed to have the love of both father and mother! I can very well read your concern and anxiety Lyn!

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Paul Warren 26 September 2015

From what I see love wins in the end the rest is just fluff. I am sure in the end truth and love will be there.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 September 2015

Of course your suggestion in poem is true and acceptable. The power that comes with money destroys and ruins so much. A beautiful poem having bright speculation. Thanks. ....10

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Kelly Kurt 25 September 2015

have experienced the same, but even tho the kids may not see both sides now, they do appreciate the time and love as much as the material and will appreciate it even more as they become adults. Peace, Lyn.

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Kelly Kurt 25 September 2015

I have experienced the same, but even tho the kids may not see both sides now, they do appreciate the time and love as much as the material and will appreciate it even more as they become adults. Peace, Lyn.

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Tony Karas 25 September 2015

A beautiful, soul reaching write. Yes, The power that comes with money. It destroys and ruins so much.

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