Saturday, January 10, 2009

Borrowed Words Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm waiting here for someone.
Just who, I couldn't say.
She's bringing my contentment.
True love, I guess, someday.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Bianca Obinyan 30 June 2009

Nicely written! A poem I admire at first sight!

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Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

The achievement of your goal is assured the moment you commit yourself to it. A very optimistic poem deifiying the true meaning of adoration.....

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Cristy Upshaw 29 May 2009

sigh, hun, these words are stunning. the reader feels such words written just for them. love the way you display such written talent.

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Saadat Tahir 25 April 2009

hi GW62 your borrowed word were very very nice you bring magic to simplicity....easy and unlaboured a benchmark...i dare say cheers saadat

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a lovely write...the worgs written in advance to be borrowed later...may words would'nt much to say later

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Duh Huh 17 February 2009

I understand and when the time comes, may i borrow from yours too?

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Wolfey, tis been ages... lenjoyed immensely reading your lilting rhyme scheme again... and your theme.. yes tis one is of universal appeal... aroha Deana xx

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 January 2009

You shall never forget, for then love shall make you create more words, , even if you borrow from today these words are matchless, , simple and enigmatic write, ,10

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Sandra Fowler 20 January 2009

Your belief in what is good, true and beautiful becomes you. Very appealing write. As always, Sandra

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Rita Shay 20 January 2009

Fantastic. Your poetry is conversational and I liked it. The last stanza was my favourite. I look forward to reading more.

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Lynda Robson 20 January 2009

Passionate and I hope you find the perfect woman for you, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Autum Skiles 19 January 2009

you are so sweet to me..this poem is beautiful..your passionate..any girl would be so lucky to call you hers

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Andrew Blakemore 19 January 2009

This is a very beautiful and romantic poem, a real gem of a write. Best wishes, Andrew

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Miriam Maia Padua 19 January 2009

very lovely piece...so romantic.... words of longing...of great love and admiration i can feel the love in every written words m gives my heart a leap 10+++++ sir....

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Tia Maria 19 January 2009

Nothing wrong with putting it out there - is that not what we do when we set goals... oh you just gave me a brilliant idea; -0 .... Great poem Wolfey 10/10

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 18 January 2009

very passionate poem with heaps of love and expectation. Thanks GW sharing this wonderful piece. Bravo

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 January 2009

a wonderful piece of romanticism heart bespeks of love bestiring..............excellent exposition of love as when parades across matrix of time and space yet no beffuddled by the curtain, hope tomorrow peeps through the window of heart and beyond, ingeniously wonderful of luscious glow, wellpenned,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Jacky Blanke 16 January 2009

this poem is so beautiful i can really feel the love in it i can't even explain how good this one is

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i lovly poem straight from the heart you obviesly have alot more experience righting then i do i can tell from just this poem

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Teresa Dearing 15 January 2009

Forever the romantic, and you do it so well. It seems to roll of your pen in time and ryhm. But if love finds you will you have time to write? Great prose. T

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