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Of all the plagues afflicting man, deserving most attention
Including Big C, (the one I scarce dare mention) ,
A high BP exacts the steepest price. If diastolics load the dice against you,
Accepting your surrender, prepare for their hard-nose agenda,
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a very well expressed poem..with pathology and prognosis of a disease which push us to borrow some little time to think again about how to prevent the end of our time.... a poem which has been put in an excellent effective way..
Congratulations Peter - you have successfully managed to put 'Just what the Doctor ordered and the patient needed ' into a great poetic prescription 10+++
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7/27/2025 7:34:48 AM # 1.0.0
Poetic prescription...a timely thought...indeed a good poem10++++++++++++