Borrowed Time? Comments

lovely, but you are still in the Carribean are you not? I hope the sun comes back into your life to stay. It could be worse, you could live in England god forbid.

Beautiful flow and effortless rhymes abound in this sad and reflective write. jz

Economical, yet covers a lot of significant ground. Laden with loss, longing and regret. Very fine work. jim

great pen, thanks for sharing.10 for me.

Time runs out from all... its a matter how we make the most of it that counts! Simply amazing! Thanks Shaye. worth the 10.

Interesting play with time, a call to remember to enjoy to its fullest. Great piece!