Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Born To Live. Comments

Rating: 5.0

'' - - Let the ties of the heart loose
And shake down soft streams
Of your fine feathered dreamings.
Allow them to fly,
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Fay Slimm
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Juneil Sechico 27 May 2009

well narrated Fay! I now foun you with a great style! I love the title and the message of this piece as well!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 May 2009

The idea is successfully composed with imaginagion. 10++

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whether the holy man say it or not...it is the yearning deep within every soul...lovely piece...i take this into my favs

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Fay, you are a perfect poet.. deep words.

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Fiona Davidson 19 May 2009

Beautiful intense writing...your words inspire Fay....Fi 10+++

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 19 May 2009

Sounds like a very wise man, Fay 10

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Catrina Heart 19 May 2009

wonderful and meaningful composition written................10+++

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Fay Slimm

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