Born To Lie Comments

love is a funny game Ana... it beats you often off guard unaware...keep calm and pack confidence... you would soon have a new game where you win well written lines...carry the whole pain inside...10

I would rather say the man is a congenital liar, ever since he was born, in his mother's womb he was already a liar. This is quite depressing piece of work, full of bitterness, etc.You'll end up dead you keep reminiscing the past. Over all impression - profoundly well written...10+

Very well constructed Ana, and filled with so much bitter/sweet emotions that have left your heart in a shadow of constant reminder of what could have been.... Very nicely potrayed, and penned with much tenderness lined with bitterness that seem to unfold at the end, inspite of it all..... You will always love him uncondiitionaly...

this is a very well written and beautiful poem. perhaps you are his salvation from all the lies.