Born To Die Comments

Dear JohnJi Eid Mubarak to you and family. God Bless. See, all are born to die. I am sure, an intelligent soul, a sharp observer of nature and man like you would sure be able to measure the worth and nature of the Lord of the worlds as well. When we blame, either the creator or the creation, destiny or chance, science or myths, illusion or intuition, inspiration or aspiration we must keep our very SELF serene in all the sense. This would sure add value and fragrance to our personality and elate our wisdom too. imagine this beautiful planet is a complex lab, where we find living and nonliving specimens, thats all. sardines, shark, tuna or eel, frog or worms, butterflies or cockroaches, human or animals, all have their specif term and missions, roles to play, as the bard upon Avon rightly expressed in 'As you Like it. If one, ten or even thousands get crushed under the heavy wheels of bad luck or misfortune, why not look at the most undeserving even gets the laudable merits and securities immense! The balance of Man with Nature under God is beyond any predictions and premonitions. I am very considerate as thou art in matters of delicacies that often hurt hearts like yours. Your concern shines over the simple, straight blades of diction! Many a chain of life issues remain perplexed, and man's caprice or God's plan, not known yet, but problems, solutions and benefits still go on the frequented tracks of life. God Bless. Regards and Love again. Taj shah

a welcoming experiment. poetry is the expression of one's self in presentable language and I think it can b rhymes or free verse, which may suit subject matter or temperament of the poet. overall the poem is very good. I liked the oxymoron in the starting lines. a lovely piece

You tried to make rhymes free, some there still lock to be in rhyme music..so how do you feel writing this kinda of work...i guess it just about self expression and free to write..if you feel then u know what i mean :) _Soul