Thursday, July 28, 2016

Born To Die Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who said we are all born to die?
We are born to live and thrive
And to better this world, strive
By work and worship until we die
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Venkateswaran Krishnan Sreenivasan
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Chinedu Dike 13 September 2020

Insightfully conceived and well crafted with artistic brilliance. Great lines! A beautiful work of art.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 July 2016

Birth and death are two definite destinations In between them oscillates progeny of human. However, the inspirational poem beautifully unfolds what should be done by human in the sojourn called life span. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 July 2016

Very nice. An inspirational drop with a positive note. Thanks for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 28 July 2016

very fine, go one, I like it.

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Venkateswaran Krishnan Sreenivasan

Venkateswaran Krishnan Sreenivasan

ERNAKULAM, KERALA, INDIA
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