Friday, November 29, 2013

Born To Be A Winner Comments

Rating: 4.5

I left to be the last
Last one to know the meaning of win
Numbers always writing on my life
Though first place was not for me
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Unwritten Soul
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Chinedu Dike 21 October 2017

Faith keeps those that keep the faith. An insightful motivational piece, well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain blessed.

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Mj Lemon 13 October 2017

A fantastic, uplifting message Soul. Indeed, winning does not mean 'first.' The two may not be synonymous. A terrific poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2017

Dear madam, you have so nicely and astutely defined the real meaning of difine. A real winner is he who never gives up. It is a nice write to your friend Ellias. Most impressive lines are... . If i don't have a win now And if my wings are broken to lift Doesn't mean how the story will be ending As conclusion never be made at the beginning Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 June 2016

Creation! ! We are all made for a purpose. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Simone Inez Harriman 18 November 2015

A beautiful uplifting write that soars. Stunning....10+

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Paul Sebastian 22 May 2014

A beautiful write! I like the flow and rhythm. True, winning is not at the beginning and you go to win what you want and you are not competing anyone, except your self.

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Lyn Paul 17 April 2014

Your writing is all from a Winners hand Soul. Winner is such a beautiful write from a caring Soul

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A massive mountain of motivation that will keep readers climbing to success! Well done my friend!

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Paul Brookes 13 December 2013

Sometimes you can lose and still fell like a winner. If you have the human spirit and the indomitable will to live your life your a winner. Try to be kind and never take more than you need your a winner. for your life that to mean something then your a winner. Nice poem I liked the theme BB : O)

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Marco Angelo 11 December 2013

Captain A. there are somethings that i know. well, i suppose that races and games only propose the goals to the other level of the life or i can say that winning in life is a different thing.....with a laughing smile on the face you will leave the world, so you are the winner. but we have other sights of winning, like the common races and games and etc winning in them will bring proud and everybody like the feeling. nice write Mr. Unwritten soul. respectful.

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Heather Wilkins 08 December 2013

as long as a person does not give up he is a winner. losing is giving up. a good poem

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 December 2013

Once again Beautiful write Soul. Being the first or last in race of life doesn't matter but a hope always to stand in race really matters. A winner is not seen from outside but a winner is the one who feel he or she has won from heart....That really changes our life...Keep on participating the race and You are Born to be a Winner. Loved reading it.

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Dinesan Madathil 05 December 2013

There is a promise of good innings in the game of life ahead and you have told that to Ellias.. fine Soul

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Valerie Dohren 04 December 2013

Life is a mixture of winning and losing, and it is said that that it is not the winning but the taking part that is important. Good write Soul.

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Nader Baheri 30 November 2013

yes if we be ourselves and just try we still are the winner. and i m sure he ll be the winner soon. we are the champion.the song by queen i mean.lol~nb

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 30 November 2013

this is the most perfect poem that i read. not only because it is written for me. because it has the soul of right and justice it is full of truth. i learnt that i lost but there are still wings called hopes...thank you soul. thank you for this and thannnnkkkkss to every nice people and friends here. i love you with my whole life. again thanks soul.

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Gajanan Mishra 29 November 2013

very good spirit, thanks, Please read my poems..

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