We’re born free, ready to learn all about everything;
When we opened the eyes at that fatal day,
We couldn’t imagine what was longing for us.
Inside was so soft, calm and comfortable;
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i like the flow of your words written in this poem..freedom, liberty..that is all what we want..we are born to what? to be a slave? to be a prison? to be a puppet? NO.... we are born to be free as written in the first line of this poem..grace
Life is very frustrating but there is alot of good things to look forward too.a ten from me.If you get a chance please read my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKU(pg8) of my poem collection) .Thank you.
What a colorful discussion of philosophy. The attack on society is direct and blistering on it. Seldom have I read such. A condemnation that I shall not soon forget. If that was the purpose, then the writer has succeeded. Well done! GW62
a poem which discuss many issues in our life...loved the title....well done.. There’s hope, I know. A trail of tears will bring it to us. It’s hard, I felt. A sharp pain we have to overcome. The choice is yours. There’s something more to share out. Threw out the cook. The goodness dwells deep into your heart! ! !