Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Born To Be Comments

Rating: 4.3

We’re born free, ready to learn all about everything;
When we opened the eyes at that fatal day,
We couldn’t imagine what was longing for us.
Inside was so soft, calm and comfortable;
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allan macli borges
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a poem which discuss many issues in our life...loved the title....well done.. There’s hope, I know. A trail of tears will bring it to us. It’s hard, I felt. A sharp pain we have to overcome. The choice is yours. There’s something more to share out. Threw out the cook. The goodness dwells deep into your heart! ! !

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Lady Grace 13 June 2009

i like the flow of your words written in this poem..freedom, liberty..that is all what we want..we are born to what? to be a slave? to be a prison? to be a puppet? NO.... we are born to be free as written in the first line of this poem..grace

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 April 2009

Enjoyed

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Life is very frustrating but there is alot of good things to look forward too.a ten from me.If you get a chance please read my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKU(pg8) of my poem collection) .Thank you.

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Greenwolfe 1962 08 February 2009

What a colorful discussion of philosophy. The attack on society is direct and blistering on it. Seldom have I read such. A condemnation that I shall not soon forget. If that was the purpose, then the writer has succeeded. Well done! GW62

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Sathyanarayana M V S 07 December 2008

Deep and profound play of words and expressions.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 October 2008

A beautiful composition. Lovely.

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