Sunday, March 30, 2025

Born The Ghosts Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm thinking of you,
When deep down I know
That your not thinking of me
Or ever will again
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Kevin Patrick
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M.J. Lemon 02 May 2025

This is brilliant, Kevin. There's something here that reminds me of The Phantom of the Opera. The mask is seductive, but the reality is horrifying. Perhaps that is the real substance of 'love.' A great verse, Kevin.

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Rob Lamberton 25 April 2025

Phantom love… a haunting tale!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 31 March 2025

This is a haunting story of lost love. Nicely written.5 stars.

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