You took my breath away
and I died alive
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There is a gap After each breath For the world you die But spiritually revive
Beautiful little poem! The experience of rebirth in love is wonderfully brought out!
Wow begins in witty word play pun! A wondrful romantic poem ken! Nice to read frm u again. Thumbs up.
Metaphor at play. Short yet deep. Thanks for sharing. please may I invite you to read, rate and comment on my poem.
A heart so filled with love. Thank You