Born Again Comments

I have a huge problem doing end-rhymes and not slaughtering the meaning and flow of a poem. You handle it with grace and loveliness. Excellent!

As I walk on the road rough and steep, your footsteps follow I no more weep

Well worded and very clear sentiments. I just love it!

Excellent poetry! ! ! !

Sweet musical word dance in glee, In rhythmic beats, the sorrows flee.

Sheer brilliance. the magic of few words

Lovely poem, delightful.

nice poem...really like it...