Born A Cry… Comments
Of dark deep forest amidst roars of carnivorous
can't you hear distinctly my newborn cry?
Pushed on, no request, to this wilderness
on compulsion sheer, you sent me, why?
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the helplessness of a good soul against a raw carnivorous world depicted well there...10...please read my 'a fine culture'...' a baby dawn'
A really thought provoking..so deep.. And yes you're right..a profound philosophy within... Have to go on despite the situation from which we can't control..no option..but to live life with the life we had...
breaking free from the bondages of pain.. a questioning attitude seen here... good one
breakfree from the bonds of incessant pain.. only then will true purpose on the inner horizon reign
MERCILESS BONDAGES... U HAVE EXPRESSED THE PAIN SO BFULLY... : D
And set my self free...... that summerizes it all. excellent composition.
deep profound philosophy highlighting the helplessness of man in being birthed and the necessity of living through roles differing in size and shape till past misdemeanors are compensated for....the philosophy of reincarnation that underlies this piece is interesting...well done sir!
The longest word in English is 'Smiles' for there is a mile between 'S' and 'S'-as a joke, they say. The rarest commodity in the modern world of stress and strain is 'Smiles.' Many keep their faces grim and rarely we can see smiles anywhere around us. My two poems 'The Best Smile.' and 'laughter is the best medicine.' speak the same truth. One should relax all the nerves and muscles to make a smile, whereas one should keep the nerves and muscles rigid, to show anger. Which one is, therefore, easy to do and why we don't do? :
A splendid read Venkat! ! The Lord forgives everyone For sins in the past Gods wonders are many His powers are vast Pray for forgiveness, from Up above 'Twill free thee from thy pain And ye -shall find love! ! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad
Awreness and mindfulness are the first steps towards salvation. Kesav a well composed poem, a cry of a soul yearning.10+ mamta
To Acknowledge the wrongs we've done, the road to Redemption as just begun, before god, we are but a child, learning and on us he smiles... Andrew 10
To be born as a human being on the earth is the reslt of poorva janma punya! Let the new born prove to be a great asset to the society!
We all cry when we are born as we take our first breath, a very symbolic piece Ke, well written as always, thanks, 10 Lynda xx
every living organism comes to earth crying i suppose...birth is yet another painful beginning!
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7/25/2025 6:57:19 AM # 1.0.0
‘…Can’t you hear distinct my new born cry? ...’ Is it society’s cannibalism…? …very subtly percolated out the Poet’s anguish and concern… Will we so-called civils come into…enter into the ‘into of this ‘…Pushed on, ......... ‘? If so when…and Big when…if not how to make us hear… Ten++ with humane anguish Ms. Nivedita UK