Born Comments

Superb! Loved the poet's thoughtful expression. Top score.

Oh, I want to add this apology- -Please forgive my tardy response to your comment on my poem.. Poem Hunter has stopped notifications of comments made on my poems so until they fix this problem, I have to go back through all my poems looking to see if there is a new comment.. Thank you for such an introspective examination of this piece! ! These statements of yours are extremely encouraging to me.

I like the tautness of the construction of this poem. The brevity is used to pierce the target like an arrow, straight and true. You word choice is definitely spot on. A perfect 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++