Tuesday, January 14, 2014

Boredom Comments

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Boredom creeps on my mind
blots white gleaming surface
like a guitar which idly waits
Strings taut, fingers aching
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Doris Cornago
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Doris Cornago 20 January 2014

Hi Marvin. Nice to see an old friend again. I knew from the start that a relationship from a detached philosopher will turn out this way. We do not share the same platform of detachment which he says is nearer to heaven than an emotional landscape. Do you think so? I hope that you will be with me on this. Can you make poems based only on thinking, and not on feeling?

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Marvin Brato 20 January 2014

I agree, relationships are not perfect especially when your love and care for the person is not reciprocated, boredom comes in... but then love and care transcend beyond the limits of human understanding, thus excites poetic explosion!

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Marvin Brato 20 January 2014

I agree, relationships are not perfect especially when your love and care for the person is not reciprocated, boredom comes in... but then love and care transcend beyond the limits of human understanding, thus excites poetic explosion!

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