Saturday, November 25, 2006

Bored Comments

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I sit here lifeless empty
My mind placid and drained
Covered in a blanket of nothingness
I sit here undisturbed
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Evy Moore
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Joshua Fegley 26 November 2006

I can empathize with this poem...well written and expressed. Later...

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Nathan Strange 25 November 2006

I completely uderstand, you said it all beautifully.

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Alfredo Jacques 25 November 2006

I just wanted to say it sounds painful to be bored. I really enjoyed the poem especially the line' covered in a blanket of nothingness'

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