Bored Comments

You have great elements in your art You need to bring out th beauty in each line to convey its magic

Dear Kelvin, thanks for asking me to comment. I find this an entertaining poem, you are able to define the meaning of boredom through the list of images in daily life. Great. But what about dividing this poem into three verses and see how the clear cut form and structure of your poem will show. For me, it is more for the readers to be guided by a flow and structure of lines. It is much easier. Possessive case with apostrophy s. Look when you say, in God's name.