Border Comments

Borders are not made on the land, borders are made in the hating hearts.

Like breeze Like sunlight Love transcends It is never confined It is not limited. A lovely write on a sensitive theme, the cause of all wars and root of hatred too. You have captured the reader since top to bottom flawlessly. Loved the theme, its growth and the stream of evolution too. Regards. Subhas

Like breeze Like sunlight Love transcends It is never confined It is not limited. Loved this amazing poem defining borders in manifold dimensions. 10++ for it.

Like breeze/Like Sun light love transcends penetrating all borders (imaginary lines).. superbly penned

Wonderful imaginary. Boarder separates land to land and man to man yet we should cooperate each other. You have nicely and touchingly painted. I quote.. Like breeze Like sunlight Love transcends It is never confined It is not limited. Oh brothers Come Let us hold hands Let us make This world One country. Thanks for sharing.

there is no border for five elements of nature. this is just man's creation. nice poem

and, as nice as it might sound at first, one country can have its own problems. probably ALL do now. [i think even Shangri-La had its problem(s) ! ] And the larger the country, perhaps the bigger the problems may be. i don't think it is the map borders which cause the problems so much as the different languages, religions, levels of civilization (whatever THAT means!) , the differences in climate, energy and food sources, and the disparities between the haves and the have-nots. ok! i may be sounding too much like a professor of something! i'm just a dumb retired american male ex-postal worker! ! i'd say PH makes a SMALL contribution to world harmony. let's take what we can get! i like it. bri :)

Love transcends all borders.A beautiful line from a beautiful poem Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

Yes! See how a border separates people to people! . This is very common in Africa! ! With People speaking the Same Language but, divided with Borders. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

you speak the language of Plato and the likes of sir Thomas....one can only wish that wishes would grow a mane and run like horses... :) until that happens it will remain a pipe dream of us poets and those visionaries who by default are a bit removed from reality. you have shuddered in poetic grace and cast away the yolk of cleavage in these few lines... lovely liked

Wonderful! ! Loved it! !

Thanks, Didi. It's the word of my heart too. We will break this border one day.

Heartfelt poem, Nicely written....And how seriously we take this border/ boundary to divide humans in nation.