Boracay.......A Dream Paradise Comments

To be unfolded! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

And when the evening comes In one stroke of the magic wand festival colors of the sky turn into enchanted fun... The night gently breaking the sun Oh! Sunset what a perfect view I don't need a cue. Peace and serenity lies within you... really beautiful poem of the beauty of your home land philippines my dear poetess. i love this poem. tony

maybe you should submit this to Conde Nast Traveler, a magazine i would never need, because i have no money to spend on travel! - - - - - - - - - - - - at first i thought you might be talking about a VERY SPECIAL person. then i looked up Boracay, even before finishing the poem or reading your helpful poet's note, and ALL WAS CLEAR TO ME. nicely done. - - - - - - - - - - among the several very picturesque images you painted with words here, THIS was my favorite: And when the evening comes In one stroke of the magic wand festival colors of the sky turn into enchanted fun... do they have a mcdonalds? thanks for sharing this visit to an island paradise! bri :)

Really nice, the story lies to be unfold, beautiful composition of this poem. Nice on sharing.