Sunday, November 5, 2006

Boost Of Confidence Comments

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dont look back,
just forget,
keep straight,
dont give a shit!
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malorie genoff
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Richard Jarboe 07 November 2006

I like this poem very much. You are a wise for your age. Keep working on the craft of writing. If you don't mind me saying so, try to use words that translated into any language would touch the emotions of any reader in some way. With what you feel, it could be significant to anyone in the world. Richard

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