Tuesday, July 14, 2020

Boon And Curse Comments

Rating: 5.0

As a boon, relieving children
from year long penance,
the schools were closed
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Valsa George 27 July 2020

This is a cry rising from every elderly heart! When our generation looks back to the childhood days, they have a handful of sweet memories to hold onto even in their advancing age. But the present children are couch potatoes, glued to their computers and smartphones subjecting themselves to a kind of mental decay! You are absolutely right! A very good write!

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Thank you very much Valsa George. Children of our generation were very much fond of the nature and nature's gifts. We were free to mingle with the nature and to learn from it abundantlybut the modern children are not so free and not so dedicated

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Bharati Nayak 19 July 2020

My poem 'Shifting Paradigms' is also based on this issue. Please read it.Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem.

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Bharati Nayak 19 July 2020

Yes, today; s children miss long holidays and the freedom to play in natural surroundings.Computer game is their past time.Bound to heavy curricula of schools, burdened by parental expectations, they lose their childhood fun that should be their birth right.

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What today's children miss were being enjoyed by the children of olden days. What I find wrong with modern children is that they are not given enough freedon to mingle with the nature's care for them. Thank you very much

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Anjandev Roy 18 July 2020

Such a fantastic write.....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Thanks a lot for the comments

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 July 2020

Thought provoking poem. I endorse to your thought. My heart goes to them.10++ for this poem.

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Thank you for the comments and for the rating dear poetess

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 July 2020

Today's children! ! ! Facing the odds of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 July 2020

Let them set free In love Let them set free In thinking, learning, believing Let them set free In everything Blessings and curse Nothing can do For the children Without realistic doing

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Thank you Mahtab. While the vacation was a blessing to the chldren of begone days, to today's children it is a curse since they are shut inside for many reasons

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