I was forever losing things, and my laughing friends called me a klutz,
Like darker skies misplace buttery sun, when a severe storm develops.
I had once lost the keys to my house, and waited locked out all night,
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Beautiful poem, vivid imagery. Well conceived and wonderfully penned...
Losing; from losing have to learn- why everything is lost, where it is lost; Then the present thing will not be lost.
Learning from the past mistakes is a healing experience. Top stars for this poem of realisation.
Dear Evelyn, I so much enjoyed reading this poem so full of images of nature, so beautifully expressed.
Superb poem. I quote my fav: As I kept finding my possessions, I began to learn from past mistakes; And I saw that a life lived too carelessly, invites chaos to overtake.
A magnificent poem embellished with nice rhythm and rhyme. Entertaining and with great insight. To my Poem List.
Evelyn this is fantabulous composition and it was a blessing to read this this morning. So hopeful and full of quite moments to dit and analyse this covid lockdown. Worthy work.
People I knew just came to expect, that soon a thing would be lost, Like the loss of gold intensity, in the garden sunshine had glossed....admirable expression. Loved this magnificent poem. Top score!